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Re: The Secret
by Angel Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:54 pm
The secret....
Her beauty entices and excites, though makes me wonder
How can such feelings invade me so strongly?
He engulfs me with his sensuality; with commanding force and care
Waves soar within me when he is near; his touch is powerful
She for her softness, her lips, her smile
Her gentle caress melts me
Desires run wildly; within my heart, my body, my soul
To experience you again
I shall be reborn
Her beauty entices and excites, though makes me wonder
How can such feelings invade me so strongly?
He engulfs me with his sensuality; with commanding force and care
Waves soar within me when he is near; his touch is powerful
She for her softness, her lips, her smile
Her gentle caress melts me
Desires run wildly; within my heart, my body, my soul
To experience you again
I shall be reborn
Angel- Number of posts : 57
Registration date : 2008-06-28
Re: The Secret
by Z Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:23 am
I like this Angel. I've read it over a few times, and I like the way I get lost in the speaker and the spoken of "I" "Her" "He"
It feels like you've given voice to the energy bond between the two lovers here!
This is the sort of insight that poets have the sort of light that they shine upon the world to illuminate the unseen!
Awesome.
It feels like you've given voice to the energy bond between the two lovers here!
This is the sort of insight that poets have the sort of light that they shine upon the world to illuminate the unseen!
Awesome.
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Age : 59
Registration date : 2008-06-25 -
secrets no more
by Angel Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:36 pm
When I was reborn, the world had changed
His gentle kisses had all but dried up
She took them with her while I slept
His sensuality; mine is no more
Pain runs wildly; within my heart, my body, my soul
how can such feelings invade me so strongly?
His gentle kisses had all but dried up
She took them with her while I slept
His sensuality; mine is no more
Pain runs wildly; within my heart, my body, my soul
how can such feelings invade me so strongly?
Last edited by Angel on Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:46 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : font's funny looking)
Angel- Number of posts : 57
Registration date : 2008-06-28
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